In a small town, an embittered young male struggles with the beliefs of a little girl who thinks the old man in a Santa suit is Santa while he robs a bank on Christmas Eve.

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dpg 112,231 pts

But it will be compared to "Bad Santa".

Who is the main character? ?The young man or the old man? ?Or are they accomplices?

And why would there be a struggle over beliefs in the mind of the young man? ?Why would he care what she believes? Doesn't he have more urgent matters -- the heist -- on his mind?

?What is the young girl doing outside after dark? ?Why isn't she home with her family on the most family-oriented night of the year?

Erica 1,465 pts

Not really,? the girl is too young.? Maybe I should put that in the logline, an 8 year old little girl.? That doesn't mean I can't add a romance element with the girls mom.? I'll have to explore that option.

IDredMan 71 pts

So it's... A romance version of Bad Santa?