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But it will be compared to "Bad Santa".
Who is the main character? ?The young man or the old man? ?Or are they accomplices?
And why would there be a struggle over beliefs in the mind of the young man? ?Why would he care what she believes? Doesn't he have more urgent matters -- the heist -- on his mind?
?What is the young girl doing outside after dark? ?Why isn't she home with her family on the most family-oriented night of the year?
Not really,? the girl is too young.? Maybe I should put that in the logline, an 8 year old little girl.? That doesn't mean I can't add a romance element with the girls mom.? I'll have to explore that option.
So it's... A romance version of Bad Santa?