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A homeless ex-soldier rebuilds his self-esteem by violently defending his fellow homeless, only to bring the law down on the people he is trying to defend.

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Scott Danzig 2,039 pts

I was confused as to how the law gets involved until I read your explanation.? Initially I thought maybe he starts becoming a little too cop-like and ends up becoming too abusive, but, that's not what you meant.? I'd definitely make it clear in the logline how that happens.

Richiev Singularity · 82,714 pts

Is there a specific threat to the homeless community? Something we the reader can visualize?

Something like this (Although your story would be different)

"When his homeless community is attacked by illegal migrant workers who want to take their squatting grounds, A former soldier leads his ragtag community against those who would harm them."

Richiev Singularity · 82,714 pts

Possible Title: Under the Bridge