Good logline?

Two friends balance school, careers and relationships along with their partying lifestyle.

2 reviews

Richiev Singularity · 82,714 pts

Two friends balance school, careers and relationships along with their partying lifestyle.-- The End

Mike Pedley Singularity · 51,300 pts

Please read the 'Our formula' page.

This doesn't have an inciting incident, a protagonist, a goal, it sort of has stakes (although they don't make sense - school and career... surely if they're students they don't have careers?)... in short, and I apologise for being blunt, no this is not a good logline.