FLASH

A soldier in WW1 swaps places with his grandson in the present. The soldier has to find a way back. His grandson has to survive.

2 reviews

alain_alfaro 0 pts

Yeah, this def sounds cool. Nice opportunity to show the "freedoms" that the grandfather fought for and the grandson is living in. Can raise an interesting conversation.

elbigelow 0 pts

Cool idea. In the first line, I would use "from" instead of "in" and the last sentence is a fragment. Rewrite it if possible and you're onto something.