A wounded African American man seeking refuge from BLM riots appears at the door of a rich family. After taking him in, he appears on the news as wanted for murder and the family must decide if he was framed, or face the consequences of harboring a murderer.

2 reviews

Odie Samurai · 2,208 pts

Leaning towards:
“A comfortable upper-class family must decide [ACTION/GOAL] when a wounded African American BLM protestor seeks refuge.

Thinking aloud - the “wanted for murder” plot point is good ACT II fodder – when we (audience) have an investment into your premise and these characters.

Keep going!

R.C. 67 pts

It is too long. Remove the unnecessary words.