Death has been conquered, adrenalin drained at the point of death creates the immortality pill used by the rich and privalged. God sickened by the murder of innocents unleashes his wraith on the immortals.

It sounds unusual. I'm honestly not sure what to think. Maybe it would be better if one of the people in the prison camps becomes our hero and triumphs over the evil instead of a soldier sent down from god. That might make it more exciting.

Hi I have shortened the logline, I think ot is a little better know.

I have thought about the story a little more and posted a new logline. Thanks for the advice.

Hi I have updated the protaginist in a new logline, thanks for the tips.

Hi some great advice here, the initial logline was really just a thought I had while looking around on this site. I have updated the logline to this:

"Resurrected by god, a lone soldier with unearthly powers must find and destroy the ultimate evil behind the immortality pill before humanity is destroyed forever."

The basic idea is that there are prison camps where the vulnerable are tortured until there souls are released, they are then used for the immortality pill. The rich, privileged etc use the pill to live forever, the knock on effect is nobody goes to heaven. God is angered by this new world order and resurrects a lone soldier to restore the balance using his unearthly powers god has granted him. Satan is the big bad guy who has actually created hell on earth, innocents killed while the greedy evil types are granted immortality.
What do you think?

With what I'm seeing here, I can only assume God is the main character. So with that in mind, there needs to be some sort of resistance against him. "... but Science has discovered ways to keep the almighty himself in check." Something like that.

I assumed God was the protagonist because he's the only single person mentioned. But it also sounds like he could be the antagonist, making an immortal the anti-hero. Maybe your lead is an immortal learning that immortality doesn't come free. There are horrible things he was kept in the dark about, things done to keep him (and others) living on forever. And he makes a moral choice to fight against it. Then on top of everything, God is reigning down on them!