Asked to help the New York City police identify a body, a geneticist believes they’ve found a Neanderthal, but when she tries to confirm her results she’s hindered at every step by her university and an influential but secretive agency.

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beezeebee Penpusher · 71 pts

Hi byron79,

Sounds like an interesting science thriller to me, if that is what you actually aimed for. The only thing missing in this logline I think is some indication as to why the geneticist has such a burning desire to fight her employer and take on a secret agency. Is she really this desperate to make a name for herself, or is it somehow personal? That would make the logline even more appealing I think.

Cheers,
BeeZeeBee