An ex-cop with PTSD, hired to avenge the murder of a child, is partnered with an artificial intelligence, but soon discovers the intelligence could be lying and must find the truth before another child dies.

by Hallucigenia Penpusher · 8 pts

A clean up of a logline I posted the other day.

4 reviews

Hallucigenia Penpusher · 8 pts

I like your arrangement a lot. Let's see...

Hired to avenge the murder of a child, an ex-cop with PTSD is partnered with an unreliable AI to find the killers before another child dies.

Odie Samurai · 2,208 pts

Leaning towards:

Hired to avenge the murder of a child, an ex-cop with PTSD is partnered with a [shady/shadowy/unscrupulous] AI [vehicle] to find the truth before another child dies.

It's almost 2024. Break the mold by abbreviating "artificial intelligence" 😉
Make this yours and have a great New Year - take care.

Hallucigenia Penpusher · 8 pts

Form? Do you mean how is it presented? It's a voice inside of a car that it controls and is chauffeuring the MC through the job.

Odie Samurai · 2,208 pts

If you don't mind, what form does the AI take?