An airline crew smuggling a $2 million diamond on board begins to get murdered one by one. [Title: Fight or Flight}

5 reviews

RedRoad 211 pts

This could? be a mixed genre crime thriller with horror as the second genre. Something comes on to the plane with the diamonds. Could be a curse, a demon guardian, an alien,etc.

Neer Shelter 55,464 pts

Who is the main character and why must they do whatever it is their goal so happen to be?

Check out the 'Formula' tab up top for some logline basics.

 

Richiev Singularity · 82,714 pts

... and what will the lead character do about this situation?

LingeringThoughts 61 pts

I like the short, simple style of this logline, but I would agree with the last reviewer that it needs a little more personality. Maybe allude to the murders, but don't let us know so much of what will happen.

BeyondVision 86 pts

Think about what makes this different than any other smuggling film. That's what I would want to hear in the logline.