After robbing a casino in Vegas, a pair of stubborn biracial twin arrive in New York to start a new life, they discover the trouble they left in Vegas, didn’t stay in Vegas.

2 reviews

Odie Samurai · 2,208 pts

This is a better version.
1. A full-blown Ocean’s Eleven robbery I cannot see for these two - but skimming off the top maybe. What did they steal?
2. I don’t get “stubborn” the way it's written, are they prodigals returning home?

Take care.

sabrown Penpusher · 41 pts

I like it!!!! I was immediately intrigued and wanted to know what trouble followed them from Vegas.