Accused of a crime for revenge, a sensitive, feminine male struggles to keep his sanity while incarcerated in a small town county jail fully inhabited by a variety of unpredictable strangers.
Torn: Sixty Days of Calaboose
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Torn: Sixty Days of Calaboose
Wrongfully incarcerated, an innocent gay male must rely on his feminine nature to survive as he struggles to maintain his sanity against the uncertainty of unpredictable cellmates and the jailhouse mentality that threatens to break him.
The problem isn't that you should drop the line, just that the line can be read two different ways.
How about something like:
After being falsely accuse of a crime...
After committing a crime of revenge...
Unpredictable strangers, I mean.