A selfless man attempts to break his brother out of prison when his relationship with his wife goes sour.

Charlie’s Shoes

4 reviews

Vania Berruecos Penpusher · 20 pts

Why he wants to break out his brother instead of solving his relationship with his wife? Also, first time I read it I thought the wife was actually, his brother's.

Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai · 1,742 pts

The correlation between why he decides to spring his brother from prison and the break down of his relationship with his wife is unclear, as are the stakes. Why does he have to break his brother out now?

Christopher Penpusher · 60 pts

Great name for a movie. I'm learning more about visual aspect of the logline. I was wondering how did the relationship go sour?

AspiringZach 0 pts

Probably the last one I post for a while. For all who have helped me on the last few loglines, thank you!