A self-made businesswoman risks bankruptcy to complete her biggest real estate project, but everything depends on her persuading a single holdout–an eccentric maker of wind chimes–to sell his land.

3 reviews

Odie Samurai · 2,208 pts

Yes, could use some romantic tension, immediate thought "real estate mogul has finally met her match when a handsome eccentric lone holdout refuses to sell” something like that.

dpg 112,231 pts

I don't find any salient fault with the logline. But neither do I find any salient feature. A unique take, an interesting twist such as what SSalvatore asked about, the adversaries fall in love. Or it pits the woman against her own father.

The logline describes the steak -- but it doesn't have any sizzle. And loglines are more about selling the sizzle than describing the steak.