A psychology student has a theory to rid himself of his horrific childhood memories and returning to his small hometown he tests them out on his unsuspecting girlfriend, but when a bored local girl sets her sights on him as her escape from the town, it puts a cleaver into his plan.

Lay-Bye Baby

3 reviews

skeyescene 0 pts

Thanks Halli, leaving out the girlfriend had never entered my mind, but you're correct. Thanks for a new outlook to this agonizing process.
Thanks Adele93, thanks for you input too, it all helps.

Former member Penpusher · 20 pts

Maybe it's ok to leave out the unsuspecting girlfriend and just focus on the guy and the local girl. Sounds interesting just a little confusing.

Adele93 0 pts

Not that I'm good in writing excellent loglines, but.. this one isn't really clear to me: who's the antagonist? The bored local girl?