A newly divorced mother of two risks losing the support of her ex-husband and two daughters when she pursues an alternative family with a butch graphic designer who inspires her to move the way her pulse beats and finally be herself

Thank you for reading our run-on sentence. Ha.

:-) Okay. It's a drama above else that really shows the impact of a mother's decision on her ex-husband and two young daughters. Will treasure what you wrote. Thanks! :)

Better but should you mention that it's a relationship with the other women, kinda sounds like a love story in the first draft, you want to let us know is it a buddy movie or a love story, the original sounded Like a love story between two women, the latest one could be a buddy story

Closer?: "A divorcee and mother of two risks losing the support of her family when another woman inspires her to move the way her pulse beats and finally be herself."

Awesome. Thanks. It was originally closer to what you mentioned. Funny how earlier peeps said it needed more detail. :-) Appreciate the good luck! :-)

This is too long with too much going , is it about the conflict between her old family or about her growing into this new person, which is more important. I know that both these elements are part of your story but it needs to be shorter, maybe "a divorcee risks losing the support of her family when she pursues a relationship with another women who inspires her to be herself". Hope this helps and good luck