2 reviews
The only thing you need to add is some detail around the family responsible.
Being specific in a logline that explains a well worn genre, like revenge. But you do get some free brain power from the reader because we all know what a revenge story looks like.
The abuse adds to the depth of imagine I conjure when reading a logline.
How does the mental and physical abuse relate to the murdered family or the murdering family?
The concept sounds interesting, but familiar, and a special twist would make it juicy.