A married woman accidentally drinks a love potion and falls in love with a shy prince. Her open-hearted husband is excited for her, but the King isn’t.
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Things are happening too the lead character, but you haven't told us what the lead character must do about it.
Is she going to try to find an antidote for the love potions?
Is she going to try to win the prince's heart?
What is the lead character's goal?
Not quite sure why her husband would be OK with that. Not sure what the stakes are either. What's her journey?
One more thing, Story is conflict, without conflict, there is no story.?
You say her husband is excited for the lead character... if there is no conflict between the husband and the lead character, what is his purpose in moving the story forward?
If the Husband is okay with the situation, why not have the lead character be single instead of married? Or replace the husband with a best friend character.