A homeless man commits suicide, resurrects as Christ the Lord, and takes his revenge against a racist homicidal police force.

The Revelationist

5 reviews

Mike Pedley Singularity · 51,300 pts

Yeah it works better, but he doesn't commit suicide knowing he'll be resurrected. Plus, I thought suicide was frowned upon in pretty much all religions? With that in mind, why isn't he killed by the police? Much stronger.

Whether I personally agree philosophically isn't really the issue, it's whether your idea is considered marketable by producers.

CLAY53 Penpusher · 45 pts

Brutalized his entire life by an evil, racist, brutal police force, a homeless man commits suicide, resurrects as Christ the Lord, and takes revenge against a homicidal police force.

Hi Mike, does this structure work better for you even if you do not agree philosophically?

CLAY53 Penpusher · 45 pts

Your comment helps, and I appreciate your words and the time you took the write them. The Scriptures state Revenge is the Lords. People don't want to accept when the Lord returns, he returns with a weapon of war... Why? To get revenge against all the evil, racist, brutal police (smile)... That's how my Lord rolls. Thank you, Mike.