A headstrong girl wants to change her sex to claim her inheritance. But the psychiatrist at the ? sex-change clinic claims her heart.

Est? claro el logline y denota una muy interesante historia. Pero personalmente, para no revelar tanta trama, y ser sugestivo e intrigante, yo lo escribir?a as?: "Mientras una aguerrida ni?a heterosexual lucha por cambiar de sexo, la siquiatra de la cl?nica se ensa?a en develar sus motivos"

As I said previously, I am intrigued by the premise.

But upon further reflection, I have had a reality-check moment.? If traditional patriarchal values prevent her from having a claim to her father's inheritance as a girl, why would they recognize that she has a legitimate claims after the sex-change operation?? Surely, the sex-change will deeply offend them, violate all their traditional values.? Why would they recognize her as a legit guy when she will still be unable to perform the most important duty required of a male in a patriarchal system:? to wit, sire offspring.? So they won't recognize, won't accept her as a genuine guy.

If anything, the more credible response would be for them to cast her out, reject her as one of the family altogether.

Just saying.

You want to write a script with an LGBTQ theme, but you refer to people from the transgender community using the slur "trannies"? Are you sure this is the right theme for you?

Whatever you write about, treat your subject with respect.