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The logline is too long and?confusing. And it?gives away the ending -- something a logline should never do.
The confusion, in my mind anyway, arises from the fact that they exchanged phone numbers. So why didn't he just call her?? Also a guy is utterly bedazzled and bewitched by a woman -- but can't remember her name, not even her 1st name?? How probable, how believable is that?