A grieving vigilante puts his family in danger when he goes on a killing rampage to avenge his murdered son…

The Executor

3 reviews

Filmstar Penpusher · 6 pts

Or:

When a violent gangster goes on a bloody rampage to avenge his murdered son, his daughter becomes the target of his enemy.

Andrew Bates Penpusher · 270 pts

I like it.
With loglines I'm not sure you want to end it with "..." Makes it feel like it is missing something, needs something etc.