A disgruntled, older woman sets out to erase all signs of her recently deceased husband, but when his ghost shows up, she discovers a truth that changes everything.

Every Little Breeze

5 reviews

mulford sibly 0 pts

"seems to whisper Louise." Please give us a clue of what she wants, and why he opposes it. My heroine dumps her control freak fianc

Former member Penpusher · 20 pts

Hi Mulford,
Thanks so much for replying. This is an older one which I've abandoned totally. What I've got now:

'Til death do us part does not apply in this romantic comedy where a determined older woman struggles to get free from a husband, so controlling, he just won't quit, even after he's dead.

What do you think? Barbara

Former member Penpusher · 20 pts

The hero is the woman, the opponent is the ghost, his appearance is the life-changing event. I would like to know her goal, what she wants to accomplish. I would also like to see the jeopardy she is in, and some irony in her tackling this (undefined) problem.