A disgruntled, older woman sets out to erase all signs of her recently deceased husband, but when his ghost shows up, she discovers a truth that changes everything.
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"seems to whisper Louise." Please give us a clue of what she wants, and why he opposes it. My heroine dumps her control freak fianc
Hi Mulford,
Thanks so much for replying. This is an older one which I've abandoned totally. What I've got now:
'Til death do us part does not apply in this romantic comedy where a determined older woman struggles to get free from a husband, so controlling, he just won't quit, even after he's dead.
What do you think? Barbara
The hero is the woman, the opponent is the ghost, his appearance is the life-changing event. I would like to know her goal, what she wants to accomplish. I would also like to see the jeopardy she is in, and some irony in her tackling this (undefined) problem.