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A crush kindled comedienne and a connection delusional fan influence a viral coma recovery star’s search for a tramatized teen?
Following the cessation of long-term life support,??the creative mind of an abused teen terrorized into a coma, anomalously wakes into viral internet stardom where he relies on a childhood girlfriend, a boyfriend delusional meth addict and pain escallating hallucination for rediscovery
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Following the cessation of long-term life support,??the creative mind of an abused teen terrorized into a coma, anomalously wakes into viral internet stardom where he relies on a childhood girlfriend, a boyfriend delusional meth addict and pain escallating hallucination for rediscovery
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I'm with Richiev.
I'm not even sure who the main character is. It seems as though the story is about a person who's come out of a coma and they're searching for a teenager - and this person has been influenced by the comedienne and her stalker....
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