A covert agent is wanted for his wife's murder and branded a terrorist. With the world on the brink of collapse and a rogue agent wanting war. He has limited time to find her murderer, the rogue agent and uncover a shocking truth that would bring the world to it's knees.

Espionage Thriller

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Richiev Singularity · 82,714 pts

You're welcome, good luck with your script!

Patrick Fox 0 pts

Thank you.

I do like your changes and will be using that one. :)

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After a covert agent?s branded a terrorist, he has forty-eight hours to stop the perpetrators of a conspiracy that?ll frame him for a new World War.
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I want to thank you and dpg so much for all your help. It is very much appreciated:)

The treatment is complete, not long started the screenplay. I just wanted to see if people like the idea of the story. :)

Richiev Singularity · 82,714 pts

A good rewrite! Nice job :)

Some very minor changes:
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After a covert agent's branded a terrorist, he has forty-eight hours to stop the perpetrators of a conspiracy that'll frame him for a new World War.
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I think you have almost got this one down?

"Is this written? Or are you testing the idea by first creating a logline?

Patrick Fox 0 pts

Revision 4: When a covert agent is branded a terrorist, he has forty-eight hours to find the perpetrators of a conspiracy that will frame him for a new World War.

Patrick Fox 0 pts

I like it. I have created another with a mixture of everything discussed :D