A cop must track down a violent criminal loose in the crime free society of 2050 and learns something about the killer that is set to change her and this utopian society. Psychological thriller.

Clause 11

6 reviews

danielarmour2012 0 pts

There's definitely a strong story here, I think it just needs a character flaw/sense of irony for the main character to truly work. Other than that, great work!

Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai · 1,742 pts

Sorry Lynne ... my first thought was Demolition Man too! Maybe it's what she learns that sets this apart? If that's the case, you've gotta reveal it to us - it's the hook that makes your story fresh or not.