A civil engineer saved a worker life during casting a Dam, but he slipped inside the reinforcement cage and trapped there. With walkie-talkie and 45 minutes the Civil Engineer have to clarify his care to his family and friends.

My two-cents would be to add a sympathetic flaw to the protagonist. What makes us (the audience) want to root for him during the runtime? Is he lonely? Is he a family man? Is he young? Hope this helps.

My two-cents would be to add a sympathetic flaw to the protagonist. What makes us (the audience) want to root for him during the runtime? Is he lonely? Is he a family man? Is he young? Hope this helps.

Need to clarify things, fix the grammar and make the story more clear. He saves another work and now With walkie-talkie and 45 minutes the Civil Engineer have to clarify his care to his family and friends??? Why?