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on When he receives his visa to the US, a struggling poet returns back home to resolve issues with his overbearing mother and confront the death of his terminally ill sister before departing his country.

When he receives his visa to the US, a struggling poet returns home, to resolve his issues with his overbearing mother and the death of his terminally ill sister. There he grows and is able to write one of his…
on A Russian Orthodox farmer torches his home and leaves with his dog hours before Operation Barbarossa and the Nazis invade Russia.

I like it but maybe change to this: A Russian Orthodox farmer torches his home and leaves with his dog hours before the Nazis invade Russia. Quicker and easier as I've never heard of OPERATION BARBAROSSA.
on A young NSA Agent impersonates a government minister at a secret meeting on the global arms trade to terrorists. But when masked gunmen storm the building, their target is not the minister he impersonates, but the NSA Agent himself.

A young NSA Agent impersonates a government minister at a secret meeting on the global arms trade to terrorists. But when masked gunmen storm the building, their target is not the minister he impersonates, but the NSA Agent himself. What…
on When a high school kid suspects his father is responsible for a series of grisly prostitute murders, he teams up with a plucky young call girl to positively identify and stop the murderer.

A high school age boy comes to suspects his father is responsible for a recent series of grisly prostitute killings. Together with a plucky young call girl, he?teams up working to find the truth and stop further killings.Seems better, what…
on A civil engineer saved a worker life during casting a Dam, but he slipped inside the reinforcement cage and trapped there. With walkie-talkie and 45 minutes the Civil Engineer have to clarify his care to his family and friends.

Need to clarify things, fix the grammar and make the story more clear. He saves another work and now With walkie-talkie and 45 minutes the Civil Engineer have to clarify his care to his family and friends??? Why?
on Relationship between the group of friends change as they take trip to Vegas.

It is not bad but you need more as to how it changes, why vegas? Remind me of:Oil and Vinegar (1987) After John Hughes?s death in 2009, details on a lost project of his surfaced in the comments section of…
on A group of high school seniors head out to a lake house for a weekend to celebrate graduation. Things get out of hand after several of them begin using an illegal substance that opens the door for demonic possession and ultimately threatens their very existence.

I like what you have but you need to say more about the substance, maybe how they came to get it? Why it leads to demonic possession. Good one the less, I get an evil dead feel kind of.
on A cyber security analyst must steal the government’s undercover handler list when a hacker threatens to remotely crash his wife’s plane.

A Government cyber securities analyst must complete a series of treasonable tasks (like?) while attempting to find the hacker threatening to destroy?his wife?s plane if he fails (why is the plane being attacked what where is wife flying to?). (Reminds…
on To stop the government weaponising a clean energy formula, a rebellious scientist uploads it into her mind and must find a suitable donor for the formula before it fades away forever.

For some reason it seems to me like the SCIFI equivalent of Still Alice.