Ratman

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During a galactic war between humans and aliens, a soldier and his team discover something ominous buried on a planet that threatens the lives of both species.

April 8, 2013
A group of psychology students get lost on their way home during a hurricane, and are forced to take shelter in a mansion occupied by psychopaths.

April 5, 2013
When a space colony team land on a habitable planet, they discover a buried alien race and an object that threatens the fate of their lives – and the earth.

April 5, 2013
In the time of a great civil war, a young man is positioned in a tower alone where he must fight for survival with very few supplies, and a sniper rifle.

March 10, 2013
A lonely night time worker, at a weather station, has gotten tired of his pathetic life, whose wife and children don?t even respect him, when suddenly he meets a woman at work who will change his life for the better ? and the worse.

March 8, 2013

on During a galactic war between humans and aliens, a soldier and his team discover something ominous buried on a planet that threatens the lives of both species.

This is definitely a hard one to write. "something ominous" I admit was pretty lazy and vague. I just thought saying what it is would reveal too much, or it would be too confusing. It`s especially hard when the ideas…
on In the time of a great civil war, a young man is positioned in a tower alone where he must fight for survival with very few supplies, and a sniper rifle.

Good points Torie & Timmy. much appreciated. Those ideas would work well in the logline to establish the atmosphere of the situation. But for me, it was more of the IDEA, that a young boy fresh out of school volunteered…
on In the time of a great civil war, a young man is positioned in a tower alone where he must fight for survival with very few supplies, and a sniper rifle.

I didn't really want to get into the specifics in the logline, since it's not really the plot of the story. But I'll tell you since you're interested. The story takes place during the Irish Civil War at the battle…
on A lonely night time worker, at a weather station, has gotten tired of his pathetic life, whose wife and children don?t even respect him, when suddenly he meets a woman at work who will change his life for the better ? and the worse.

Thanks for the advice guys! And I understand the criticism, I established too much at the beginning, with no understanding of what the main character wants. How about this: "When a night time worker, with a family that doesn't respect…