Nandhi

The way you have written your logline makes the plot sounds like a series of episodic events. What is the key question underpinning this story? It would be useful to make this come out in the logline. And as the…

Here's my early morning rewrite: "A highly-principled, sentient robot is earmarked for recycling, and must unite a robot-hating grandmother with her estranged family, to avoid his doomed fate."

Thanks everyone for your comments. Very helpful. :)? I have honed in on the landlady as the antagonist and amended the logline? as follows: 'An abandoned, experimental sentient-robot must unite a robot-hating grand-mother with her estranged family to avoid being…

I like the story concept. Perhaps good to redraft the logline from the protagonist's POV to make it clear who the protag is. Also useful to give an indication of what the protag's flaw/weakness is that creates the drama/conflict to…