Young siblings have to use their very particular set of skills to counter bullying and alienation they’re experiencing after moving to a new country.

also thinking about replacing ‘particular’ with ‘unique’

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pinang 20 pts

I might possibly add 'Two' young siblings and new school instead of country. More I think of it the more variations come to mind haha

BenGilani Logliner · 360 pts

Well, it depends on their skills. But the term "particular" + set of skills, is more cinematic I think
I'm glad you liked it though.

pinang 20 pts

oh wow, that might be even better. I'll have a think about it! thanks a lot! Would you say "particular" is better than 'unique'?

BenGilani Logliner · 360 pts

Hi pinang,

I like your logline as it is. I believe you can make it even more appealing though by playing with the words.
For example:

"To counter bullying and alienation in the new country they've just relocated to, young siblings must use their very particular set of skills."

I hope this helps
Good Luck