pinang
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By main event, you mean inciting incident? It would be her participating in anti government demonstration and being arrested. Stake is to either be able to go away and study or to stay and be imprisoned. Problem is I have…
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I might possibly add 'Two' young siblings and new school instead of country. More I think of it the more variations come to mind haha
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oh wow, that might be even better. I'll have a think about it! thanks a lot! Would you say "particular" is better than 'unique'?