When her brother?s diary mysteriously appears at her doorstep, an art forgery investigator uses it to decipher location of stolen diamonds. She also discovers the truth about her father who masterminded an international heist and embarks on a hunt for the treasure during which she finds her family lost decades ago.

I just noticed this conversation, and would like to add that you can 'vote up' reviews.
This way, you can support what you believe is a valuable contribution from anyone.
(Once a user collects 2,500 points, they can also 'vote down' a review. )

And Rafael, you can give someone the highest kudos by selecting their review as the "Best Review/Best Answer."

;)

Karel

Hi All,
I highly appreciate ALL you comments and suggestions. I'll try to modify and shorten the last version of the Logline. Thank you again. Rafael D.
www.rhdera.com

Hello,

I'm sure that any book can be transformed in a movie.
I think that what you need the most is to make tough decision and focus only on the very main elements. You want to tell too many things that are important to you, but are they important to us, readers?

The limit to 25 words actually HELPS you. To?make tough decision about what to say.

"When she finds her brother's diary, an art forgery investigator?follows the leads to locate?the?diamonds stolen by her father in an?international heist". (25 words)

Usually in the logline you track the external goal (find the treasure) so we can forget the inner goal (truth about the family).