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Thanks for your feedback, very helpful.
I like how you ended the logline using the words, truth, and fiction.
Here is an attempt to shorten your logline a bit. Hope I didn't drop too many story elements in doing so.
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"When she befriends a woman claiming to be Charlotte Bronte's fictional Jane Eyre, a reclusive writer must help Jane navigate the modern world all while trying to untangle the truth of Jane's existence from the fiction."
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Hope that helped