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A trainee assassin disobeys killing her target and is demoted in the Assassin?s Guild, but working her way up the ranks she discovers her parents? killer and a trail to uncover why her?village was targeted for destruction and who ordered it.
Agreed with the above.
This is too long for a logline. Best you review the Training tab up top to understand what the critical components are of a logline.
Here is, in short, the key points:
Who is the main character? - clear MC description
What does he or she want? - a goal.
What is preventing them from getting what they want? - an obstacle.
Answer ONLY the above questions in a single sentence, and we will be able to help you construct a logline from that.
Hi, it does seem a little long and clunky. Recluse has done a pretty good job and making it a tighter logline.