When a na?ve woman meets a stalker online she must fight him off in order to return to her peaceful life.

3 reviews

FFF Mentor · 7,850 pts

Hello,

I suggest you to include more details to build a stronger interest in the story.
-What kind of actions she performs to fight the stalker? (going to the police :) ?
-What kind of online stalking can be filmed in a visual way in the movie? Watch "unfriended", a whole movie on a computer screen (very good), where some friends are 'trolled' by the ghost of a dead friend.

garyedwards Penpusher · 51 pts

Good logline. as we hear stories that are similar to this in the media frequently, this can start a film, web series or others...

garyedwards

mariechanel Penpusher · 90 pts

I really like how straight forward this is. However, I think more could be included in 'fight him off'. Good stuff.
Happy writing.
M