When a good-for-nothing architect after a divorce is rejected by his 6 year-old son, he signs up for a competition to create the towns new playground and win back his sons respect.

I changed it a bit thanks to the good advice I was given.

6 reviews

Sonja 46 pts

Love it, and love the previous feedback, just have to be "like that" and say that here loser would be with one o, otherwise it takes on a different meaning :)

Justine 43 pts

Thank you! And of course - the father first! :)

Piotr 29 pts

that's cool - a great drama in intimate scale, this concept defines "success" very originally and challenges our, as an audience, expectation that it must be money/career/prestige; I read here a promise of a wise, intelligent and entertaining movie with ironic twists. I'm in ;)

Korvtraktor 31 pts

Like the father-son relationship. Maybe have the father before the son in the logline as he is the main character. "When a looser architect gets divorced and his son turns on him, he must win a competion to create the towns new playground in order to win back the respect of his son.