Korvtraktor

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A psychologist meets a 12-year old girl who claims to have strange memories, one of them being the psychologist getting murdered. But when he realizes these memories are actually visions of the future, he must prevent his own murder.

September 7, 2020

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on When a small town get’s hit by a thunderstorm, and every road is blocked. The towns peoples only help is an old delusional woodsman who once was rejected by the town. In order to get his help they must appeal to him so that the town can get back on it’s feet again

I like the idea of an outcast being the only hope for an entire town! Maybe clarify in the logline who our main character is.
on When a good-for-nothing architect after a divorce is rejected by his 6 year-old son, he signs up for a competition to create the towns new playground and win back his sons respect.

Like the father-son relationship. Maybe have the father before the son in the logline as he is the main character. "When a looser architect gets divorced and his son turns on him, he must win a competion to create the…
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