Spoon on the Wall

An undercover policewoman lures a member of the Albanian mafia into a sexual relationship, in order to infiltrate and expose his gang’s cocaine trafficking.

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henb Samurai · 1,143 pts

I feel the 'undercover policewoman' needs a descriptor for her personality, or for her past. 'Lures... into a sexual relationship' sounds a little menacing, perhaps you could make this sound more procedural, while solidifying that this must be done to bring down the drug dealers.

I would introduce the ending to your logline first, then introduce the policewoman, then explain her objective.

Here's an example: Infiltration of a cocaine trafficking ring relies solely on the undercover mission of an inexperienced policewoman, involving a false love interest in a violent and ambitious member of the Albanian mafia.