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Samurai · 1,143 points

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To create a superior race, an Albino rapes members of his own Black community, then his offspring use White magic to drastically increase their numbers and later summon demons to turn the tides of war.

November 6, 2019
After the fall of the Monster Hunters Union brought on by the people they wronged, it is a time when human worth is determined by the strength of the monster they have ownership over.

November 3, 2019
A generous, funny, and charming young man now has thousands of clones who all act like him, except they have orders from their creators to bring terror to those they ensnare in a romantic relationship.

November 3, 2019
A young man smokes marijuana chronically for a decade despite disapproval from his parents, mainly because he enjoys its numbing and uplifting effects, which helps when you despise the state of the world.

October 20, 2019
A farmer believes there are reincarnated humans trapped in the bodies of his goats and together they escape into the forest where the livestock speak for the first time, their agenda sinister, their ambition astronomical.

October 20, 2019
Factory farmers are given permission to murder humans too, while those alive and still refusing to use animals are imprisoned, including four youngsters who barely survived a family of agriculturists and their own parents.

September 19, 2019
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Resentful towards his prey and questioning his abilities ever since the death of his protege, a hunter pursues a family protecting a monster they believe to be their deceased matriarch.

September 19, 2019
A one-armed young man obsesses over becoming an astronaut after a final discussion with his girlfriend, and turns to criminal actions to fulfill his desire after the space agency rejects him.

September 19, 2019
In a bid to reduce population, the dead are allowed to live again virtually, and when it becomes illegal for living people to post their opinion online, billions commit suicide while others risk their lives.

September 1, 2019
A family unit must help their youngest member fulfill his destiny while on the run from a cult who believes the super-powered child will bring the end of times, and the government who believes the boy?s purpose is to end them. – ‘Midnight Special’

September 1, 2019
Five saviours of Earth are tested when strange, celestial fighters, now in their ultimate forms after taking twelve-hundred years to hatch from eggs, declare to destroy the Galaxy for the murder of their sibling.

September 1, 2019
In time, the female menstrual cycle evolves to happen much less frequently, causing far fewer births. A twenty-second century witch-hunt begins when billions of people convince themselves that this is an ungodly occurrence.

August 31, 2019
An alchemist loses faith in humanity and roams Earth while she breaks her people’s code, manipulating the atoms of sentient beings to interact with friends, torment others, and fight an evil of her own design.

August 31, 2019
Billions of refugees seek shelter from deadly weather events, antibiotics have lost their potency, nations wage wars over land and water, and activists not opposed to violence towards humans try to save animals from extinction.

June 30, 2019
While vacationing at the same location she experienced a cataclysmic event, a mother and her family are threatened with losing their lives, and their place in society, by people who look exactly like them. – ‘Us’

June 3, 2019
Using a weapon bestowed upon him by a shamed doctor, a homeless man conquers his country. A dead body sees through its mind?s eye a war fought with lasers involving billions, and Canada?s ministerial election.

June 2, 2019
The Balcony-Scaler, The Train-Feeder, The Skin-Scratcher, and The Pornographic-Men. All serial killers. Their crimes committed the same decade, inside the same city where detectives will lose hope in search of justice.

June 1, 2019
A young aspiring musician discovers that the English language reveals a conspiracy, which he utilizes to make himself a star. He learns the rich and famous are given strange powers for their so called accomplishments.

May 31, 2019
A paranoid, schizophrenic man who loves all women does everything in his power to please a dozen quirky and unique females, who may only be in a romantic relationship with him through his skewed perspective.

April 28, 2019
Test-tube humans created by a Utopian civilization are unwittingly TV show contestants. One Uto woman tries to decimate members of a vile society, while showrunners manipulate a female Tuber to turn to terrorism.

April 28, 2019

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on To create a superior race, an Albino rapes members of his own Black community, then his offspring use White magic to drastically increase their numbers and later summon demons to turn the tides of war.

LOGLINE UPDATE #1:The strongest and smartest Black citizens must help end the war between them and an army that follows the legacy of their Albino master, who believed in the creation and supremacy of a White race.
on Test-tube humans created by a Utopian civilization are unwittingly TV show contestants. One Uto woman tries to decimate members of a vile society, while showrunners manipulate a female Tuber to turn to terrorism.

LOGLINE UPDATE #1: A defiant teenager discovers she was created by a Utopian civilization and is being monitored and manipulated for entertainment, while a disillusioned woman tries ending a TV series chronicling a purely evil society.
on Factory farmers are given permission to murder humans too, while those alive and still refusing to use animals are imprisoned, including four youngsters who barely survived a family of agriculturists and their own parents. ★ Accepted

LOGLINE UPDATE #1: A young man and his friends survive an onslaught of farmers unleashed by a satanic government, only to be arrested, turned to plastic, and given the opportunity to witness the dawn of animal-person-kind.
on Billions of refugees seek shelter from deadly weather events, antibiotics have lost their potency, nations wage wars over land and water, and activists not opposed to violence towards humans try to save animals from extinction.

LOGLINE UPDATE #2: Flying around the globe at light-speed creates six versions of the same race-car driver, who must induce a second Ice Age by themselves after their travel companions become manic from the voyage.
on A young aspiring musician discovers that the English language reveals a conspiracy, which he utilizes to make himself a star. He learns the rich and famous are given strange powers for their so called accomplishments.

LOGLINE UPDATE #3: A hip-hop musician contends in a friendly competition between celebrities, over who will collect eight billion fans first and gain enough supernatural power to bring death to every one of their followers.
on A paranoid, schizophrenic man who loves all women does everything in his power to please a dozen quirky and unique females, who may only be in a romantic relationship with him through his skewed perspective.

LOGLINE UPDATE #1: A schizophrenic man who loves all women does everything in his power to please them, especially a dozen quirky females who may only be in a romantic relationship with him through his skewed perspective.
on The Balcony-Scaler, The Train-Feeder, The Skin-Scratcher, and The Pornographic-Men. All serial killers. Their crimes committed the same decade, inside the same city where detectives will lose hope in search of justice.

LOGLINE UPDATE #1: Detectives lose hope in search of justice after it becomes apparent a variety of serial killers are active inside the same city and multiple murders are committed within the span of a decade.
on A CSIS agent returns to duty to stop an eco-terrorist leader who’s missing his original face, and his followers who are in possession of the American government’s plans for the next 81 years.

LOGLINE UPDATE #1: The best agent working for CSIS is given a secret mission to stop an eco-terrorist leader and his co-conspirators from making the government's devious plans for the next eighty-one years public knowledge.
on A police officer kills a powerful alien, and many Earthlings are infested by another. The second alien leader and the officer’s future-timeline son hold grudges against the cop for murdering their dear ones.

UPDATE #2:The opportunity to prevent his father from murdering his mother urges a young fighter to travel through time with his friends, to when a war was raging between humans and a deranged alien.?
on Using a weapon bestowed upon him by a shamed doctor, a homeless man conquers his country. A dead body sees through its mind?s eye a war fought with lasers involving billions, and Canada?s ministerial election.

UPDATE #2: A young patriot who fought and received accolades in the Laser War is recruited for efficiently leading a double life, to seduce and spy on an ex-politician and perceived threat to his country.
on Using a weapon bestowed upon him by a shamed doctor, a homeless man conquers his country. A dead body sees through its mind?s eye a war fought with lasers involving billions, and Canada?s ministerial election.

UPDATE #1: A young patriot who fought and received accolades in the Laser War is recruited to seduce and spy on an ex-politician and perceived threat to his country.
on A police officer kills a powerful alien, and many Earthlings are infested by another. The second alien leader and the officer’s future-timeline son hold grudges against the cop for murdering their dear ones.

UPDATE #1:Ulterior motivation urges a young fighter to travel back in time with his friends, to help end the war that once raged between humans and a deranged alien.
on In a bid to reduce population, the dead are allowed to live again virtually, and when it becomes illegal for living people to post their opinion online, billions commit suicide while others risk their lives.

UPDATE 2: The dead are given access to a virtual world that is restricted from the living, who must only observe it. Billions commit suicide to go viral while others risk their lives to expose cyber-inequality.
on In a bid to reduce population, the dead are allowed to live again virtually, and when it becomes illegal for living people to post their opinion online, billions commit suicide while others risk their lives.

UPDATE 1: The dead are allowed to live again virtually and it becomes illegal for living people to post their opinion online. Billions commit suicide to go viral while others risk their lives to expose cyber-inequality.
on A modern retelling of Sophocles’ tragedy Oedipus Rex with a twist. – EDDIE WRECKS – When an arrogant basketball star goes back to his dingy hometown to attend the funeral of his estranged mother, he ignores the plight and warning of his loved ones leading him to the devastating realization that at one time he inadvertently had sex with father and he is the perpetrator of his mother’s murder.

This is an awesome concept, I would love to watch this! The logline sounds very tragic and sophisticated. I would shorten it slightly to something like this: 'An arrogant basketball star returns to his dingy hometown to attend? the funeral…
on A young girl, obsessed with designing a robot that will replace her dead mother, learns that she has been chosen to compete at an International Robotics Meet, in the first all girls team. But when her grandmother is diagnosed with Alzheimers she must choose between the obligations of her traditional Sri Lankan family and her own dreams.

This concept is great, though your logline is much too long. Here's an example of how you could shorten it: 'Accepted into a competition testing her engineering prowess, a young girl must decide whether or not to abandon her team…
on A hardcore gamer learns from mysterious rebels about the true nature of his horrific childhood and undergoes an initiation ritual to confront the little black monster that tormented him as a child … again.

Your description of the lead character seems misplaced and irrelevant, unless you specify that he meets the 'mysterious rebels' while playing one of his games online. Everything else is too confusing as to why it is all happening. What is…
on When two losers, tempted by the promise of money, get mixed up in the love triangle of two witches, they will need all their wits to get out of the mess.

Very cool premise, though it currently reads more like a comedy than action movie, and the final part of your logline: 'they will need all their wits to get out of the mess' seems a too convenient and vague description…
on In time, the female menstrual cycle evolves to happen much less frequently, causing far fewer births. A twenty-second century witch-hunt begins when billions of people convince themselves that this is an ungodly occurrence.

UPDATE 1: The human female reproductive system evolves so that menstrual cycles happen only once a year, causing far fewer births. A twenty-second century witch-hunt begins, forcing women to revert back to primitive eating habits.
on A Caribbean D?butante en route to genteel refinement in Paris is hijacked to an Ottoman harem,…where life lessons far exceed anything she would have learned in school.

Honestly, I had no idea what's being displayed in the first half of your logline after my first read-through due to the terminology you use. Try changing 'Debutante', 'genteel refinement', and 'Ottoman harem' to words more commonly understood. The second…