Realizing his company is in danger of losing unpopularity, due to competition with his arch nemesis. A young successful fashion marketer contracts a plan to steal one of his high ranked female supermodels in order to boost his sales, only to grow unexpected feelings that could lead him into losing his business as a whole.

by RocBoogie 206 pts

3 reviews

Richiev Singularity · 82,714 pts ★ Accepted

Also, you should write a little more decisively?for the purpose of the logline

Instead of: Realizing his company is in danger of losing unpopularity
This: When his company loses popularity

Losing popularity is far more compelling than the possibility of losing popularity.

Foxtrot25 17,380 pts

5 words can replace your first 9 for economy:

To save his failing company, a young fashion marketer exploits a supermodel that he ultimately falls in love with and must decide between the future of his company and their happiness together.

Somewhat shorter.

Richiev Singularity · 82,714 pts

I am confused by the term, 'losing unpopularity'
If you lose unpopularity, that would make you popular, I would think popularity would be a good thing, so I can only assume you mean something else.