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The Bridge That Couldn’t Be Built
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And additional thought for your consideration , if it's not already in your plot.
If you're going to place?a?distressed?couple on the Golden Gate bridge you might as well take dramatic advantage of the bridge's reputation as a "popular" jump off point for suicide.? (Over 1,700 since it was built in 1937, more than 20 a year -- and that's only the confirmed number.)? Whatever problems the couple are having , whatever dark secrets they must face, could be driving them to make the jump -- that's the ultimate jeopardy, the stakes.
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Hello, I think that when you will have changed ?must reveal a painful truth? and "to survive the horrors that threatens their sanity and life" into something clear and understandable, you'll have a viable logline.
Lol! Thanks DPG!
No one could set a story with Golden Gate Bridge as the backdrop without consideration of that. The sub-story pays homage to the history of the bridge.