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Your statement:
?When nations start nuking each other, a friendly ET disguised as human must prevent World War III or loose the only compatible planet left in the universe?
My question:? When nations start nuking each other, isn't that too late for any ET to prevent WW3?
I think the confusion comes my use of the word "STOP"; I should have used "PREVENT" instead.
Thanks for your views, much appreciated.
Steve
Hello Steve. Kindly avoid cross-film references. After reading your synopsis, this is one possible format:
"When nations start testing their weapons, a friendly ET disguised among humans must prevent World War III with his drinking buddies or loose their only compatible planet"
I took the humans fighting each other as the inciting incident since that's what propels your protagonist into action. Everything prior to that is Setup. I took the liberty with a singular protagonist, which your previous version didn't have.
Hello Steve. Kindly avoid cross-film references. After reading your synopsis, this is one possible format:
"When nations start testing their weapons, a friendly ET disguised among humans must prevent World War III with his drinking buddies or loose their only compatible planet"
I took the humans fighting each other as the inciting incident since that's what propels your protagonist into action. Everything prior to that is Setup. I took the liberty with a singular protagonist, which your previous version didn't have.