From professional football player to professional coach he leads the top team to victory and breaks multimillion dollar contracts a long the way.

Football

5 reviews

Tor Dollhouse 0 pts

Very vague and more of a tag line than logline.

Why does he have to win ??
Whats at stake ??
Why is he breaking multimillion dollar contracts ??
What is the protagonists weakness ??
What obstacles stand in the way of the protagonist ??

Try to include all the unique factors that make this concept stand out from the crowd..

Happy writing :D

Tor

efajilan 0 pts

Sweet! Is there a main obstacle that the main character needs to overcome?

hapsta 0 pts

the character is reviled in the movie