An Indian woman returning to modern India during the heat of the mango season after almost a decade in the US is forced to choose between her lover and a traditional arranged marriage.

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Hi,
After reading the Logline I noticed it’s missing a few elements. I understand it’s a young Indian women returning home, then choosing between two men. It’s missing the conflict and antagonist force. What’s the thing jolts the protagonist life apart and what’s getting in her way.
I would leave out the modern India, of its set in the past that would be in the Logline. In addition during the heat of the mango season. Unless there is specific reason why. For example a festival or family business. Then use that instead.