An anthology series about an different high school student and a different hitman swapping bodies.

Time Warp

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tony18 Penpusher · 23 pts

1) They discovered a special organization.
2) They use a special device.
3) They stop people around them.
4) They must return to their bodies before it kills them.

Odie Samurai · 2,208 pts

Consider the following:
1. Find a solid student/hitmen connection.
2. Tell us they switch bodies. If unique tell us how; this can answer the Why Now.
3. Tell us what they must overcome to reach their goal.
4. Up the stakes by including a ticking clock.

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