After being the sole survivor of a gangland style drugstore robbery. A charismatic youth pastor retires and plots to kill the ones who left him for dead.

Flesh+Blood

2 reviews

agyeiwaa 0 pts

Too many words here. Remember, less is more with log lines. Try this out... (1) After surviving a gang style attack, a youth pastor goes for the kill OR (2) After surviving a gang style attack, a youth pastor has revenge in mind, refusing to leave vengeance to God.
All the best.

danielarmour2012 0 pts

This is very strong. However, I think the youth pastor taking revenge for the ones that didn't survive might be interesting as well. Could create an interesting moral dilemma for the story.