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When an actual demon possesses his wife during rehearsals for a stage version of The Exorcist, a faithless director must conduct an exorcism to save his wife, the cast, and himself.
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I've tried to combine the two loglines (forgive me if I know not what I do :)
'Faithless' rang better in my ears. Also, by adding the cast and himself, I felt the stakes rise, for it could kill them too.
Thank you.
Thanks Savino.
Great suggestion, thanks for that.
I was going for a coward needing to overcome his fears, but the theological angle could work too.
I like both loglines (Neer and dpg). Two totally different story directions though.
Or:
When a real demon possesses his wife during rehearsals for a stage version of The Exorcist, an atheistic director must learn how to conduct an exorcism in order to rescue her.
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That is, play off the religious theme which is, after all, the central motif of the stage drama.
This is a logline for a mockumentary (fake documentary) I'm currently writing - it's aimed at being a contained horror-comedy.