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Shrek
Solid attempt, however, you might want to avoid using the term 'a lot'
I would say drop 'a lot' altogether or use a more interesting word, like Gaggle.
"After fairytale creatures overrun his swamp, a reclusive ogre must save a princess to get his swamp back."
"After a gaggle of fairytale creatures overrun his swamp, a reclusive ogre must save a princess to get his swamp back."