A self-righteous Vigilante must face a surprise enemy before he can get revenge on his son?s killer?

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9-11-12
Filmstar says:
So maybe: A self-righteous vigilante, obsessed with revenge, takes on a new recruit who forces him to confront a past mistake before he can uncover the identity of his sons killer...

So maybe: A self-righteous vigilante, obsessed with finding his sons killer, takes on a new recruit who forces him to confront a past mistake or risk losing his family forever...

Ah I see... Yes. Got it. Also, stakes being raised is good too which your logline does. I have got another problem tho: my hero's goal at the start of the story is to find his sons killer. When one of his gang fucks up on a hit, he must find a replacement, so a more immediate goal arises. The kid he chooses forces him too see his actions are unjust, but also provides the clue to his sons killer... only after showing remorse at his past mistake - killing the kids innocent dad...