A plucky archaeologist and his meddlesome team must search a brittle primordial underground temple for escape when an excavation mishap destroys the entrance and awakens a man-eating Yeti.

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Solace1016 Logliner · 476 pts

Great concept. ?You might want to find a description other than "plucky" to differentiate this archaeologist from others (Indiana Jones, ?etc.) ? ?"A claustrophobic archaeologist, trapped inside an ancient temple by a vindictive coworker, ?accidentally awakens a man-eating Yeti and must find an escape before he suffocates or is eaten alive."

Burgundy Penpusher · 146 pts

I like this one! It would benefit from a bit of tightening: 'A plucky archaeologist and his meddlesome team must escape an ancient underground temple when an excavation mishap destroys the entrance and awakens a man-eating Yeti.' Also, why are his team meddlesome? Are they incompetent? Do they not like the archaeologist?